Lately Iāve beenĢżdoing some more reading around my thesis subject in preparation for writing up. Iāve been making notes from textbooks, casting my eyes over topic reviews and poring over original research papers.
As IĢżcoveredĢża subject related to my thesis, but unfamiliar to me, I suddenly realisedĢżhow often I wasĢżstopping to look up the meaning of particular words or phrases. Every time I did so Iād have to go back and reread the sentence or paragraph; it wasted a lot of time.
Iāve startedĢżto wonder how necessary this technical language really is. To me, it often feels a like a hang-up from the āDaysĢżof Science Pastā, when there was a huge divide between the educated upper classes and the typically uneducatedĢżworkingĢżclasses. The only people who would read these technical writings were the educated, and it almost seemed like a competition to see who could write the most jargon-filled paper (at least, thatās how I feel when I read old research papers).
In addition, there seemed to be the attitude that if you didnāt understand something, you werenāt smart enough to be reading it, anyway.
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Today though, scientists, and specialists of all kinds, are much closer to the general public. You donāt have to be a scientist to read original research. You donāt have to have a degree in physics to be interested in whatās going on at the Large Hadron Collider.ĢżYou donāt have to be doing a PhD in cell biology to want to understand the basic principles of embryonic stem cell research. Science and society overlaps so much these days.
And thatās myĢżpoint ā why is science still using such technical language and alienating people who donāt understand it, when so many more people want to and can understand? Hell, I felt alienated reading about a subject related to my own PhD thesis, because I didnāt understandĢżhalf the words.
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Now, I understand that in someĢżcontexts, for example in the interests of brevity and accuracy, technical language is useful for getting to the point quickly. I understand that specialist journals are just that, and theyāre likely to be read only by people familiar with that subject.
But what about papers in journals that cover everything and anything in a broad subject, eg, biology? Not every biologist is a neurologist or a muscle physiologist or a geneticist. We donāt all know the ācommonā technical language for every field.ĢżI feel that the biggestĢżjournals, such as Nature and Science, are a bit better at avoiding jargon (although occasionallyĢżsome pretty rubbishĢżscience gets in), probably because they know that their audienceĢżis incredibly broad, catering for scientists, journalists, the general public and beyond.
Iām just wondering if itās time for us toĢżreassess the purpose and readership of some of these journals and textbooks.
You can pretty much guarantee that itās going to be accessed by a wider scope of people than it was, say, half a century ago. So isnāt it about time that we update our language to accommodate this? Particularly in instances when you can easily replace the technical word or jargon-filled phrase with common language of a similar length (I found this was the case A LOT when I was looking stuff upĢżrecently; it was very frustrating).
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This is what I intend to do when it comes to writing up my thesis. Originally, I thought that Iād do the āofficialā version for my examiners and university, full of all the technical terms one might expect, and then do a āsimplifiedā version for myself to keep, and for friends, family and the internet (if anyone isĢżremotely interested in reading it). And then I thought: why? Not only is that duplicating the work for myself, but why shouldnāt a PhD thesis be accessible to everyone? So thatās what Iām going to do.
Iām going to make my thesis as readable as possible, for anyone. Of course there will be things such as statistical tests where Iāll have toĢżjust write the name of the test I use rather than explaining how it works in a billion words, but, where possible, Iād like to make it simple.
Iād like to make a plea for future (and current)Ģżresearchers to bear the non-specialists in mind when they write things up. We all like using big words when we know what they mean, because it makes us feel smart (I definitely do this) but surely itās preferable that more people understand what youāve spent the time and effortĢżwriting?
In this post, Iāve really just been airing my thoughts on this matter, butĢżIād love to hear what other people think about this topic ā do you think academic texts should be jargon-free? Do you think thereās a time and place that we should use jargon? Comment below or .
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Michelle Reeve is a final year Biotechnology and Biological Sciences Research Council PhD student in spider locomotion at the Royal Veterinary College and University College London. This article originally appeared on her .
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